Last Letting Go?


Dark death then dark nights.
Kiss outside the library
Echoed down the years.


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5 Responses to Last Letting Go?

  1. Katie's avatar Katie says:

    oh, totally intriguing! I love it!

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  2. Juliana Eades's avatar Juliana Eades says:

    “Kiss outside the library” is intriguing and mysterious, or am I missing the obvious?

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  3. Alice Nye's avatar Alice Nye says:


    A home run of a haiku/image. It really engages the senses. I wonder about past tense “echoed”.

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