Lightening the Load



My path in twenty
Twenty three comes lined with the
Baggage I’ll let go.

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5 Responses to Lightening the Load

  1. Linda Smith says:

    I loved this! It is so visual and creative.

    Like

  2. Hey Alice — Thank you! Your comment almost read like a Haiku — so I couldn’t resist!

    I’m right behind you
    Love the post, the aspira-
    tion, the fine Haiku.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Alice Nye says:

    I’m right behind you–I love this posting, this aspiration, this fine haiku.

    Liked by 1 person

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